Workshop #2

Again thanks for all the great ideas from the class. I am now trying to go down the list and correct or change things that I believe need to be changed. The presidents hands movements helped a lot I believe, but decided not to draw other angles of his head, and just went with eye movements. I fixed the crowd a little and it actually turned out better or as good as it's going to get due to me only be one animator (wish I had a team of animators and writers). I also finshed the money dropping in all the scenes which does make it look better. Waiting for the fixes I have done to render, which is taken 9 hours! Then I am going to move on with the rest of the animation fixes, which include trying to fix the Beat Up Man's walk and the Purse Robber's entrance back into the screen. Then I will render that all out and go back into FCP to work on the sound mistakes. I finished my production logo, which is "You Got Splashed Productions". And found a good example for the end credits. I did not want to put the Granny hitting the vice at the end, but I did like the idea, so I am going to put a little end scene of the granny chasing the Vice after the end credits, which will complete my film. Or I might have the end credits over that scene. If anyone has any thoughts let me know. So by the next time I present I will have a finish draft of this film, FINALLY!!! But I am sure there will be some touch ups needed.