Making the 4 min. rough cut really improved the project to me. The animation dragged on, and cutting pieces that where not needed made a huge improvement. One of the biggest weakness that I have is asking others for help. It is something that I have to improve on. So the class critique was crucial. Everybody in class gave me great ideas on how to improve this short, so I really appreciate all help!!!
To Do List
-Title Sequence
-Full Rough Cut (improvement from critiques on first 4 min., and first rough of last 4 min.)
-Clearing voice recording of Beat Up Man
-New voice for Sensitive Man
-Fix leg drag of Beat Up Man
-Add Dog for Couple in beginning
-Add Blood
-Shorten Blond White Women scene
-End Credits
-clicking sound at "Money, Money..." scene
-Have Granny use cane to climb bus stop
-add cut away shot of Sensitive Man's reaction while Beat Up Man is talking
ONCE AGAIN THANKS FOR ALL THE HELP IN CLASS!!!
